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05 October 2008 @ 07:44 pm
I'm in dire need of a Lucas icon. :(  
Title: Later
Pairing: LucasLeiva/Yossi Benayoun
Rating: PG-14
Warning: Fluff? I dunno. Unbeta-ed so mistakes are mine.
Disclaimer: 100% Fiction
A/n: For ela_alonso. She was the one who suggested I should post so I did. Feedback is much appreciated. :)

I rushed towards the crowd, who screamed, bellowed and chanted their joy, their gratitude. Hands and bodies rubbed together in excitement as a much needed goal save us by mere minutes. I felt another, more familiar body; a more warmer, harder one press up against me. 

I didn't hesitate to pull him closer, but kept my face turned away, smiling and hooting my relieved delight. He only pulled me closer to his body, tight enough to rip my attention away from everything else, but cleverly subtle that no one else noticed. Even if they did, it would have just looked like a normal embrace between two very good team mates, who had gone through so much this match and wanted to share a moment of relief together. Of course, it's more than that; but no one else needs to know right?

Yossi's arm wound around my neck, squeezing and stroking my sweaty skin, his face only inches away from mine, seeming to grow closer, the gap nearing as each exhilirating second passed. A smile played on his thin lips; as it did on mine.

The moment passed. Everyone jogged back into their positions. 
 
I grinned at the Israeli in my arms, and swept my hand underneath his shirt briefly, just to feel the smooth tide of skin underneath, skin that I knew so well and adored. He made a move of arching against me just a little. I laughed, pulling away from him, and patted his back like friends would; not as lovers. There was a time and place for that. His hand scoped around my neck and gave me a soft squeeze.

'Later' he mouthed, stalking away, a satisfied smirk on his lips.

A grin made it's way to my own. "Later."
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Erm, not so sure about the tags... :S
 
 
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חַנָּהaguardente on October 5th, 2008 07:02 pm (UTC)
Dude, I LOVE it! This is very very charming, the pairing and all... I think you managed to show this happy/tensed/joyful atmosphere! XD
th3s3_w0rds on October 5th, 2008 07:36 pm (UTC)
Hmm thanks, I wasn't so sure about this pairing actually, so that's a relief. Probably the first and last I'll be writing them together... Lucas has much potential yet. ^^

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paulii_oh_yesh on October 5th, 2008 07:39 pm (UTC)
Eurgh keep forgetting to change users. ^^
חַנָּהaguardente on October 5th, 2008 07:43 pm (UTC)
I'm not sure I'd like to read R or NC-17-rated Yossi sexing (yet), but sthg about fooling around is totally cool, besides, they fit each other ;)
paulii_oh_yesh on October 5th, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
O_O I don't think I can even imagine that happening... I mean it's... Yossi. *shudders*

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Nadine Duchess of Skittles: Lucasela_alonso on October 5th, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
I already told you what I think about this fic :). I love it! You make them work so well and just brilliant :).
It's so cute and I totally love that it's so subtle and then there's the ending and just... guh xD.
Again thank you so, so much for writing this for me! You know I love you, don't you :)?
paulii_oh_yesh on October 5th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
Hehe yep! (and see, I've changed one MAJOR error that you so kindly pointed out!) :P

Probs the first and the last time I'll write them together (I still do have some of my sanity and common sense left) so enjoy it. ^^

You love me? Oh yeah, I probably have an idea how much! XP

Of course, Cesc is still the top of the list si?

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